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![[YCH] Spring Fever](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/054e4548-59ee-4561-b74e-152fefeef800/d9qb33s-ba1ef1fc-6f3b-4c52-b93c-5a5c7d23fe55.jpg/v1/crop/w_184,h_184,x_0,y_8,scl_0.11464174454829,q_70,strp/_ych__spring_fever_by_lushminda_d9qb33s-92s-2x.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTE5MyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzA1NGU0NTQ4LTU5ZWUtNDU2MS1iNzRlLTE1MmZlZmVlZjgwMFwvZDlxYjMzcy1iYTFlZjFmYy02ZjNiLTRjNTItYjkzYy01YTVjN2QyM2ZlNTUuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEwMjQifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.esnGgWVmsr26uY8WOc-fgdNsWRHCv-UD7bxQVZzB41c)
![[YCH] Spring Fever](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/054e4548-59ee-4561-b74e-152fefeef800/d9qb33s-ba1ef1fc-6f3b-4c52-b93c-5a5c7d23fe55.jpg/v1/crop/w_92,h_92,x_0,y_4,scl_0.057320872274143,q_70,strp/_ych__spring_fever_by_lushminda_d9qb33s-92s.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTE5MyIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzA1NGU0NTQ4LTU5ZWUtNDU2MS1iNzRlLTE1MmZlZmVlZjgwMFwvZDlxYjMzcy1iYTFlZjFmYy02ZjNiLTRjNTItYjkzYy01YTVjN2QyM2ZlNTUuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEwMjQifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.esnGgWVmsr26uY8WOc-fgdNsWRHCv-UD7bxQVZzB41c)
![[Commission] Tohka Jharmal](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/d6885f79-1e25-4de3-8f64-aea815300d83/dcg590q-3c243ba8-5072-44d3-80cc-1516fb3d850a.png/v1/crop/w_184,h_184,x_0,y_8,scl_0.10823529411765,q_70,strp/_commission__tohka_jharmal_by_hime_takamura_dcg590q-92s-2x.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.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.oTr-KZuXD596Uvh_Go_zfFCLPBUA5sgWbyOhBDKJ51s)
![[Commission] Tohka Jharmal](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/d6885f79-1e25-4de3-8f64-aea815300d83/dcg590q-3c243ba8-5072-44d3-80cc-1516fb3d850a.png/v1/crop/w_92,h_92,x_0,y_4,scl_0.054117647058824,q_70,strp/_commission__tohka_jharmal_by_hime_takamura_dcg590q-92s.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.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.oTr-KZuXD596Uvh_Go_zfFCLPBUA5sgWbyOhBDKJ51s)
Description
Yay! First ever finished picture of this character. 
Yep, she's an original character that I own. I'm a bit proud of this picture, actually. Not sure if I should be or not but I am.
Funny. It was just supposed to be a filler image for my website but look at it. Like so many details and full color and everything.
Wow. So bright. So shiny.
I bothered to write a description of her character type!
"The Manx build characters are usually female with short fur coats over their body, huge and vibrantly colored eyes with incredibly large paws on all fours. They usually have a small to average sized chest and a very larger rear. They can be tailless, have a short, rumpy tail, or a half-tail. Their hair is normally cut in a bob style or medium to long thick hair pulled up in a pony tail. The Manx is a rather powerful and rough but somewhat dim-witted character. They usually have an energetic personality and cause a lot of ruckus completely by mistake, almost always just playing around, rarely serious. Getting one angry could very easily result in serious injury or death! Yikes!"
Lots of goodies there! Support me!
Yep, she's an original character that I own. I'm a bit proud of this picture, actually. Not sure if I should be or not but I am.
Funny. It was just supposed to be a filler image for my website but look at it. Like so many details and full color and everything.
Wow. So bright. So shiny.
I bothered to write a description of her character type!
"The Manx build characters are usually female with short fur coats over their body, huge and vibrantly colored eyes with incredibly large paws on all fours. They usually have a small to average sized chest and a very larger rear. They can be tailless, have a short, rumpy tail, or a half-tail. Their hair is normally cut in a bob style or medium to long thick hair pulled up in a pony tail. The Manx is a rather powerful and rough but somewhat dim-witted character. They usually have an energetic personality and cause a lot of ruckus completely by mistake, almost always just playing around, rarely serious. Getting one angry could very easily result in serious injury or death! Yikes!"
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Comments10
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactI really like this, the volume, colors, anatomy and the design, but i think that the problem here is in readability. The amount of detail makes it hard to understand, for example her left paw is really confusing and putting a highly detailed paw right next to a not as much detailed face makes the face not as visible as it should be. of course the viewers eyes are drawn to the girl's eyes but, here comes the only problem design wise, her mouth is way too small to look likable and so her whole face suffers alot. It's the same thing as with sexy women, even if her body was a 15/10 if her face is ugly she's a 5/10. hope this helps <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> my first critique, I really like the design but you could improve the face, Also bonus points for the ears and the hair